Bass tablature for "Through Struggle" by "As I Lay Dying"

Artist: As I Lay Dying
Piece: Through Struggle
Instrument: Bass
Submitter: Sarious
Tab provided by tTabs

Hey. This is a great song. I borrowed some of the notes from another tab, but I thought they were wrong and didn't sound right. So I changed a lot, and this is what I got. I'm sure its no where close to how its really played. But, this sounds good and is really fun to play. Its my first tab, so take it easy on me.

Key:
~ = let it ring
p = pull off
h = hammer on


Intro
|--------------|
|--------------|
|--------------|
|-0~-----0~----|

Pre Verse
|--------------------------|
|---------8--7--------5--4-|
|---8--7--------5--4-------|
|-00-00-00-00-00-00-00-00--|   x3

|------------------------|
|---------8--7-----------|
|---8--7-----------------|
|-00-00-00-00--000---555-|

|--------------------------|
|--------------------------|
|--------------------------|
|-0~----0~----0~----8~---5-|

Verse
|--------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------|
|-7-7-7-7-7-121212-9---7-7-7-7-7-444-5-| x2
(those are ^twelves^)


|-------|
|----23-|
|--34---|
|-0-----| x7

|-----------|
|--1210-----|
|------1211-|
|-0---------| x7
(twelves, elevens, tens...)


Bridge 
|----------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------87------------------------------------|
|-----------------57---87-57-------------------58-7856-3---|
|-000-000-000-000-------------000-000-000-000--------------| x4

|------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------7-----|
|----------------------------------0---8---|
|-0000-0-0-0-000-0-0-000-000-000-----------| x2

Pre Chorus
|-----------------------|
|-----------------7-----|
|---------------0---8-5-|
|-0000-0000-000---------| x4

Chorus
|------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------|
|-88888888-55555555-0000000000000000-| x4

|--------|
|--------|
|--------|
|-8~--5~-|

Verse 2
|----------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------87------------------------------------|
|-----------------57---87-57-------------------58-7856-3---|
|-000-000-000-000-------------000-000-000-000--------------| x2

Chorus 2

|--------------|
|--------------|
|--------------|
|-8~---5~---0~-| x4

Bridge 2/Pre Break Down

|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|-0-00----00-00-00-888-5--00-00-00-555666-8-|

|--------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------|
|-00-00-00-888-5--00-00-00-555-8-00-00-00-555666-8-| 


Break Down/Outro
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|
|-000-000-00-00-000-000-000-000--| x4

|----------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------12-10------|
|-000-000-00-00-000-000-00-00------12-10-|x2